Le Tue Fiamme

Jan. 9th, 2016 08:14 pm
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Title: Le Tue Fiamme ("Your Flames")
Author: [livejournal.com profile] nuraicha
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] tamarelmensdorp looked it over for me, but after she went through it I changed many things, so there might be mistakes all mine. Thanks as well to [livejournal.com profile] mjartrod and [livejournal.com profile] mcsparklez for helping me out with a tricky paragraph I was having trouble with.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: (PLEASE READ THIS) Matt Bellamy/Female Reader (that's it, Matt/You)
Summary: Time for discussion had come and gone - you were to obey.
Warnings: BDSM (domination mainly), rough sex, HET SEX (not a warning by itself, but given that I always write slash in this fandom...).
Disclaimer: This is all fiction and I'm not making money off it.
Author's note: I don't know where this came from but here it is. Last time I wrote het of any kind was in 2014 so be gentle with me :P Criticism is very welcomed!

You looked into his eyes: they were holding your stare with steely determination, ordering you to follow his command. It mattered little whatever you thought about it, he had barked an order and you were to comply without hesitation. Time for discussion had come and gone – you were to obey.

You didn’t mutter any confirmation; he didn’t need it – everything had already been mutually agreed to since the moment you planted a foot inside the dimly lit room.

You opened your mouth and he filled it with his cock.

He wasn’t expecting you to show off your blowjob skills or well practised technique. That night wasn’t about flicking your tongue around the underside of his head, sucking hard just as your mouth started travelling upwards or accompany the bobbing motion of your head with a screwdriving motion of your hand. No, he didn’t want that.

For tonight you were only a wet hole in which he could thrust his length for as long as he wished. He didn’t care if he was so huge your eyes watered when his cockhead charged against the back of your throat, or if you gagged so much you were leaking mucus and dense saliva all over his member.

Because he loved having you at his mercy. You could see it in the fiery storm his eyes had been transformed into, the way his mouth hung open in pleasure, the strict grip in which he held your hair, keeping your head in place for giving you a thorough face-fucking.

When his orgasm arrived, he was quick enough to yank you away before beginning to come all over your features: thick spurts of semen landed everywhere, from your hairline to your chin, dripping down your nose and shooting through your parted lips.

Months before, you wouldn’t have thought it could be possible. Yet there you were: kneeling on the floor, covered in warm sperm and so soaking wet you just knew you had stained the carpet beneath you with your fluids.

His name left your lips, almost against your will; a barely-there whisper that conveyed all your admiration and devotion towards him. It wasn’t even a plea; it was a mere declaration of endless love.

“Stand up,” he told you. You hurried back to your feet, standing on wobbling legs not only due to the physical strain, but mainly a consequence of your aroused state. His semen was starting to dry and your skin would be itching very soon, but you didn’t mind the slightest bit.

His blue eyes were now shining with satisfaction, the sort that comes not only from post-orgasmic euphoria, but also from pride and affection.

“Time for your reward,” he announced, a promising smirk gradually taking up his sharp angles.

Two impossibly long fingers entered your drenched pussy with force, mapping all your weak points with the skilled knowledge only a lover could possess, while a calloused thumb rapidly teased your clit. For a passing moment you feared to fall, but he quickly wrapped his left arm around your waist, sustaining your pliable body against his.

Your high-pitched moans sounded alien to your own ears. Your body was so hot you felt your skin, your core, your whole being burning. His mere presence was overwhelming, your senses flooding with the sight of his eyes full of lust, the remaining taste of his come and flesh on your tongue, the smell of his sweat and musk surrounding you, the warmth pouring from his hands, his breath against your face, his fingers twisting inside... Oh god, were there three now?

“You’re mine.”

His voice stated a fact and it rang through your ears like angels chanting at the doors of paradise.

You became fire.

Date: 2016-01-09 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamarelmensdorp.livejournal.com

I love the title you chose. That last sentence just did it for me, powerful.
Also, I very much like the 2nd person pov. We don't see that very often.

Date: 2016-03-08 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you! For the title I have to thank Finley: they gave me the idea when I started thinking about the "fire" topic.

I'm glad you like this POV because I think I might have fallen in love with it! I'll probably write more in that POV.

Again, thank you so much for your help with this <3

Date: 2016-03-09 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamarelmensdorp.livejournal.com
I might have fallen in love with 2nd person POV too. It makes things so intense for some reason.

Date: 2016-01-10 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibichi15.livejournal.com
Omg.....this was SO hot and so well-written! I'm so glad you posted, despite feeling nervous! It was definitely great. Loved it and love you <3

Date: 2016-03-08 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Sharon! *blushes* That "well-written" comment really got to me, thanks <3

I'm pretty sure I'll write more smutty oneshots as this... ;)

Date: 2016-01-10 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stefanyeah.livejournal.com
Oooh, very hot indeed. ;)

Date: 2016-03-08 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Dankeschön! I'm glad it was hot for you :)

Date: 2016-01-10 10:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] mjartrod
As I told you yesterday, there isn't nearly enough het on museverse, so thank you for this XD

You nailed the POV, 2nd person works fabulously for this.

It was intense, blunt, steamy and ended with a bang. All you really want from a short piece like this.

It's been such a long time since I read such a powerful, in control Matt. It's funny because I always have see him as the more submissive one in gay stories but when it's het, good GAWD, the man is fucking fire and that's what I like to read and you got that perfectly too.

Love the title too and how it tied in to the story at the end.

Months before, you wouldn’t have thought it could be possible.
And again, there you go. Just this sentence and there is a whole world behind it that you want to find out about.

Well done xx

Date: 2016-03-08 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
YOU'RE SO RIGHT. In fact, today I was rereading your "Dirty Tricks" miniseries (which I think I never commented on, shame on me) and thinking "thanks God Sophie understands my need for het in the Museverse". As a bisexual person, I guess I "need" to read about women as well, especially in smutty pieces, so I just wrote what I wanted to read.

Glad you enjoyed the POV; it's certainly one of my favourites to write and it goes well with porn, I find.

What to say? It doesn't matter how much time has passed since you commented (sorry about that), I'm still incredibly humbled because of your words. I don't know how to react? You have made me so happy telling me all of these things, honestly. I'm so, so happy and honoured you liked this and it worked for you, and all the praise you have given it... Wow, just wow.

I think we already discussed dominant!Matt in January? But yes, I share your opinion. My headcanon (and I think it happens often) is that bisexual people (like I want to imagine Matt to be, both IRL (lol) and in this story) shows more one side with one sex than the other, so yes, powerful!Matt for het and submissive!Matt for slash works nicely for me, hell yeah!

About the title, as I commented to Tamar briefly, I owe Finley one for this! I wanted something that had to do with the last line and my story "Tu non mi basti mai" came to mind, so I went to look up their lyrics for something related to fire... and their last album is basically filled with fire references, so voilà! Italian title, how typical of me :P

Seriously, Sophie *blushes* THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Date: 2016-01-11 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matturemuser.livejournal.com
Nicely done missy. This is a position I'd be very happy to find myself in, so it was lovely to read it from that point of view. Made the story far more powerful and in the moment. I certainly wouldn't object to more.

Date: 2016-03-08 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I know right? I love readers' POV because of that, it helps you to put yourself in that position and HELL YES PLEASE! I'm glad it worked for you too, thanks for commenting <3

And as I told someone above, I'll probably write more smutty oneshots with Matt/Reader when I have time :)

Date: 2016-01-11 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
Well, damn. That was very intense. Great choice for the title and how you tied it in the end.

Date: 2016-03-08 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
I'm glad it worked for you! Title was a god-sent and I'm very proud of the last line, so I'm happy you pointed those out. Thanks for reading and commenting *hugs*

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