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Title: Changing The Rules
Author: [livejournal.com profile] nuraicha
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13
Beta-reader: my friend Veronica
WARNINGS: none
Summary: The next morning Matthew’s world felt apart when the first thing he observed after opening his eyes was Dominic’s tousled hair on his pillow.
Disclaimer: This is fiction and I don't want to offend anyone. I'm not making money of this. I don't own Muse, just the plot. This is pure fantasy and it isn't real and never will be.
Feedback: It'd be so appreciated and loved. I accept any comment and constructive criticism is the best way to learn!
Author's note: First time posting Muse fic in English! Oh god, I'm so nervous of posting this, because I've been lurking around MS all this summer (with my old account) and now I'm posting something and it feels strange!
I'm very fond of this fic, not only because it was my first Muse fic, but because it was written in a special place and after a writer's block. This is a translation of the original Spanish fic and it has got a sequel that I haven't translated yet, but I will as soon as I can.
I will like to thank my beta Veronica, who always reads and corrects my English fics even if she doesn't like the pairing or the fandom (thank you very much, Templar!). Also many thanks to @tennant___ (who encouraged me to post this story in the first place) and especially to [livejournal.com profile] hyper_bliss: I haven't got enough words to express my gratitude, Lu, without you I'd never have translated this! So thank you very very much for reading this and I hope you enjoy it more in English than in the crappy translation of Google. Gwazie! <3
Dedicated to @Freebatch_, because she was the one who introduced me in the Muse bandom and I'll forever hate adore her for that.

The next morning Matthew’s world felt apart when the first thing he observed after opening his eyes was Dominic’s tousled hair on his pillow.

The previous night they had been completely drunk: the gig had been spectacular and in order to celebrate it they had been partying and drinking way too much, which was not unusual, but they had never drunk to the point of ending up naked in the same bed.

This had changed last night in the hotel lift when Matt, drunk as a skunk, hadn’t resisted the unknown temptation that suddenly Dom’s lips were offering to him and had kissed them without a second thought.

Contrary to what he had expected, he didn’t reject him but responded vigorously to the kiss, entwining his hand between Matt's red hairs and directing the other to his hip, pulling his body towards him.

Before either of them reflected on the consequences of what they were about to do, they found themselves locked in Matt’s room, kissing as if the world’s end was coming tomorrow, moans escaping of their mouths whenever they stopped kissing for breathing and their hands on the matching bulges of each other jeans.

However now, when the morning light slipped in through the curtains, Matt found himself confronted by the harsh reality: a head that threatened to explode, a devastating sensation in the pit of his stomach, a scratchy throat like a scourer and, above all of that, a terrible feeling of guilt.

They had fucked up for real, what had happened in that bed hadn’t just been a couple of chaste pecks just for kidding: it had been full-blown sex, for the first time in his life with a man and, on top of that, with his bandmate and one of his best friends. That night of booze could cost them both a lot.

Matt turned in the bed, lying on his back and rubbing his eyes with both hands, almost feeling the horrible bags under them. All of this had been a mistake, a big and stupid mistake, despite how much he had enjoyed it: sex like no other he had ever experienced. Neither Dom nor he were gay, so they shouldn’t have slept together. How in the hell was he going to look at his face now, when it was the same face he had seen mere hours ago, moaning in pleasure when Dom came thanks to him?

Suddenly, he could feel Dom turning under the covers, realizing that his breath had ceased to be slow and almost imperceptible to a more regular and audible sound. Oh, shit, had he just woken up?

“Fuck, my head…”, he listened to his left, his worst fears confirmed. What now? Should he say ‘good morning’? Or pretend to be sleeping? Or better get up and run away? No, that wasn’t an option; this was his room, if anything, he could go to the bathroom and lock himself there until Dom left…

“Matt?”, Dom's voice had become a whisper full of insecurity, too close to his ear for comfort.

It was now or never.

“…hello”, he said hesitantly, trying to sound neutral. Luckily Dom had drunk so much he couldn’t remember anything, he could tell him that if both of them were naked was for some stupid bet, or –

“Matt…”

Matt swallowed, which didn’t help at all to get rid of that silly lump he felt in his throat since Dom woke up. Now Dom’s voice was more serious and firm. The time to speak had arrived, dammit.

Matt reluctantly turned to face Dom, praying inwardly his eyes didn’t show the scorn or rejection he was convinced he would be greeted with: the rules had changed and Matt didn’t have a clue about what would happen from now. Just the thought that this could break their friendship ripped his heart apart.

However, Dom's eyes showed only a sleeping haze and an air of calm, making Matt fall silent instantly, the torrent of apologies, explanations and even insults that had gathered on his tongue totally evaporated, replaced instead by a sensation of disorientation, unable to stop staring at those lips that had given him so much pleasure a few hours ago. How could he give the speech expected in these situations if it was impossible for him to focus in any part of Dom’s anatomy that wasn’t his mouth?

But Dom just smiled at Matt's muteness, approaching his head slowly to Matt’s and planting a chaste kiss on his forehead.
“Matt”, Dom started to say as he took a lock of red hair between his fingers and placed it behind his ear, causing a slight chill traverse Matt’ spine, his body instinctively coming closer to Dom’s.

“Matthew”

When Dom pronounced his full name in that tender and trusting way, Matt's mind went blank and he acted on impulse, joining their lips, without thinking that he probably had morning breath and surely one of the new rules was that they couldn’t repeat any of the acts they had done the last night.

To Matt’s surprise, Dom didn’t pushed him right away, but accepted his kiss enthusiastically and laughed softly when they parted, his cheeks tinged with a slight blush and looking timidly at him, but looking somehow confident.

“Dominic...”, Matt started to say, a new torrent of words ready to be fired. There was so much to talk about. What the hell would they do now?
However Dom threw a look at him that clearly meant a ‘be quiet’, moving his head calmly down Matt’s body until he finally reached one of his nipples, his mouth hovering over it for a second before kissing it gently.

This gained Matt’ silence immediately, his breath hitching slightly. Nevertheless he couldn’t keep his hands to himself, grabbing Dom’s hair and pulling his head up, in order to have Dom's lips again meeting his, the two of them snogging with a confidence they didn’t know they had until last night.

That day Matt learnt sometimes the rules didn’t have to change.

Date: 2013-09-17 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gf-futurism.livejournal.com
Oh my god this was absolutely beautiful! I'd love to read the sequel to this, please post it soon if possible <3

Date: 2013-09-18 10:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for your comment! Your words have made me very happy :D I'm translating it at the moment, and I'll try to have it soon but it's 1000 words longer than this so it may take a while!

Date: 2013-09-17 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyper-bliss.livejournal.com
yaaaaaay!! finally you decided to post it. and now that i read it in English I got even the things I was missing.. which makes me love this OS even more than before, so sweeet and Matt with red hair is just too khkjlbhdjbjhchjvvbhgc <3<3<3<3

Dom is cuteness on legs, the way he reacts aaawwww <3

I love them, best couple EVER

can't wait for the sequel, you know I much I love it.

bwilliant job, dear

Date: 2013-09-18 10:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thanks to your support! Without you I'm sure I would have never posted this, really.

Thank you very much for your comment, I'm glad that you know picked up the things you missed when you read it the first time. And yes, Matt with read hair is too sexy for words! ;)

Glad you liked it, I hope to have the sequel soon <3

Date: 2013-09-17 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaossbells.livejournal.com
Really, you should not be nervous about this :D
It was a very beautiful situation and I think you described Matt's feelings pretty vividly. I liked it a lot, especially his reluctance to look at Dom and how his thoughts went from zero to maximum speed in what felt like no time, immediately diving into his insecurities.
You really should post the sequel asap ;)

Date: 2013-09-18 10:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Aaawww thank you very much!!! I'm very glad you liked it, I wasn't sure if I was doing a good job describing what Matt was feeling, so your comment makes me happy :D

I hope to have the sequel translated soon!

Date: 2013-09-18 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] take-a-bow06.livejournal.com
omg, loving this fic so much!!<3
also, lo leí en español y me encanto! :,) agradable ver de vez en cuando fics en español ya que casi no hay, espero ver más de tu trabajo por aquí! ^^
keep rockin and sorry for all that spanish, i can't help myself xD

Date: 2013-09-18 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
WOW! Did you really read in Spanish? That's good, I'm never sure about translations, that's why I didn't plan to translate this at the beginning! So glad you read the original one :)

Y sí, ¡nunca hay nada en español por ningún lado! Es una pena porque estoy segura de que hay gente que no tiene suficiente nivel de inglés como para leer fics y entonces se queda fuera del círculo :/ Y sí, lo verás, en cuanto traduzca la secuela, pero ya está colgada en mi AO3 (http://archiveofourown.org/works/951817), así que si tienes ganas puedes leerla ya :)

Thanks again for your comment!

Date: 2013-09-18 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilurvebelldom.livejournal.com
Thank Goodness I wasn't able to comment in the morning. Wouldn't have been coherent enough. =/
Anyway. Coherence isn't exactly back but I'll still try...
Why have you been hiding this beauty from us for so long????
This is- just one word for it- perfect!!!!!
I mean it. I just loved it. I've always adored morning afters and this... a morning after to end all morning afters... amazing...

“Matt?”, Dom's voice had become a whisper full of insecurity, too close to his ear for comfort.

It was now or never.

“…hello”, he said hesitantly, trying to sound neutral. Luckily Dom had drunk so much he couldn’t remember anything, he could tell him that if both of them were naked was for some stupid bet, or –

“Matt…”Matt swallowed, which didn’t help at all to get rid of that silly lump he felt in his throat since Dom woke up. Now Dom’s voice was more serious and firm. The time to speak had arrived, dammit.

Matt reluctantly turned to face Dom, praying inwardly his eyes didn’t show the scorn or rejection he was convinced he would be greeted with: the rules had changed and Matt didn’t have a clue about what would happen from now. Just the thought that this could break their friendship ripped his heart apart.

However, Dom's eyes showed only a sleeping haze and an air of calm, making Matt fall silent instantly, the torrent of apologies, explanations and even insults that had gathered on his tongue totally evaporated, replaced instead by a sensation of disorientation, unable to stop staring at those lips that had given him so much pleasure a few hours ago. How could he give the speech expected in these situations if it was impossible for him to focus in any part of Dom’s anatomy that wasn’t his mouth?


I feel for Matt. That man's mouth. And the ending too was amazing. And I have a kink for a fresh out of Bed Dom... yknow? When he must just have woken up. That...

This gained Matt’ silence immediately, his breath hitching slightly. Nevertheless he couldn’t keep his hands to himself, grabbing Dom’s hair and pulling his head up, in order to have Dom's lips again meeting his, the two of them snogging with a confidence they didn’t know they had until last night.

That day Matt learnt sometimes the rules didn’t have to change.


The kisses were perfect too...

Everything was perfect and no. I'm not just saying that because you put in so many of my Kinks in one lil fic.... can't wait for more...

Ps- DM me if you need any help with layouts or userpics or anything. Kay? =D

*huggles*

Date: 2013-09-18 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Can I hug you? Can I hug? CAN I GO TO YOUR HOUSE AND HUG YOU?????? *g* OMG this comment has made my day! And with quotes! You're amazing Vasu, thank you very much!!

Why have you been hiding this beauty from us for so long???? This will sound weird, but the truth is that ideas are born in my head in languages, and that's why I don't like to translate, because if the story was born in that language, it's because it was the best for it... But, I admit this story can't be applied to my rule because... let's just say that the inspiration attacked me so early in the morning and after a night out, so the main reason is that my brain wasn't able to think of English at the moment! :P

I'm glad you quoted that parts, there are two of my favourites! I also love mornings afters and sexy boys just woken up, I just couldn't help myself...

THANK YOU VERY MUCH AGAIN, this comment is precious! *hugs* <3

Date: 2013-09-18 11:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilurvebelldom.livejournal.com
Of course you can come over.

And nope. It doesn't sound weird. It makes sense. English is like the only language out of 6 I'm comfortable with lol. So my stuff always turns out in english. Must be nice to b fluent in so many.

And wait. Is there a sequel. Oh my fucking Howard. I'm- you ma'am are posting it ASAP!!!

Date: 2013-09-18 07:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blisstastic.livejournal.com
Ohmygod yesss!!

This was perfect. I'm sooooo glad you put it up.. This is beautiful. I just want to quote all of it. Cute and hot. And smutty and gahhhh....

Sequel? Pretty please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?

*hugs*

Date: 2013-09-18 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!!! <3

Oh, do you really think it was hot and smutty? :O Wow, that surprises me, I wouldn't define it like "hot" and I don't even describe the sex they had (I left it open in purpose, so each reader could imagine until what point they arrived or what they did).

Aaawww I pwomise to try to have the sequel asap! But, if this had 1000 words, the sequel has around 2300, so I have much more to translate!

Thanks again for your comment! *hugs*

Date: 2013-09-18 10:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blisstastic.livejournal.com
I don't know why i chose the word hot, maybe because of the mental picturing or the vagueness..

And i like that you kept it on the cute side. :)

No worries about the sequel, take your time. But still, i want to know what happens next.. *excited*

*hugs*

Date: 2013-09-18 09:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
You shouldn't be nervous, this is a nice story! :) Loved the narration and the atmosphere, also the way you described Matt's thoughts. He was so insecure and then one look, one word from Dom made everything right. Looking forward to the next part!

Date: 2013-09-18 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Really glad you liked it! I loved the atmosphere myself as well, I'm very proud of it, especially because there isn't much dialogue, so I imagine that makes the atmosphere heavier and you have to focus in the body and the eyes to know what's happening in their minds (well, in Dom's mind, mostly), so I'm glad everything worked!

Thanks again for your comment and I hope to have the sequel soon :)

Date: 2013-09-18 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poezel.livejournal.com
Ooooh I love this fic, it's awesome! I especially love how Matt wakes up and goes from sleep to five million thoughts per minute in an instant and how Dom just remains sort of calm and cool! Lovely fic! :D

Date: 2013-09-18 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Aaaww thank you very much for your kind words! :D Glad you liked the transition between his sleepy mind and his normal mode of 10000 thoughts per minute, I wanted to make it realistic in that situation.

Again, thanks for the comment! Keep watching for when I can post the sequel ;)

Date: 2013-09-18 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] howardjuice.livejournal.com
OMG THIS WAS PERFECT!!!

pls make write another part, it would be awesome :)

Date: 2013-09-18 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for commenting!! :D

Don't worry, next part is already written, I just have to translate it, I hope I can have it for... next week, maybe? I can't promise anything though :)

Date: 2013-09-18 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-cydonia.livejournal.com
Aww this is so cute and really well written <3
I enjoyed reading it! Can´t wait for the sequel ;)

Date: 2013-09-18 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! It makes me so glad you consider it well written, I tend to be more unsure with my English writing, so this really made happy :D

I hope to have it soon but I can't promise anything! I'll do my best ^^

Date: 2013-09-21 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zetastation.livejournal.com
Wow! Irene! It's marvellous and beautiful!!! Why have you never told me about your fic? =O or it was my fault and missed a tweet?! haha Whatever, girl! This is really amazing and well written! =O Are you sure it was your first BellDom fanfic? xD

My favourite parts were:

*The previous night they had been completely drunk: the gig had been spectacular and in order to celebrate it they had been partying and drinking way too much, which was not unusual, but they had never drunk to the point of ending up naked in the same bed.* wow! I think I see "Closer" here! hahahahaha *shush* why do I love so much those situation? yeah, when smth really big happnes when they're drunk!

*“Matthew”
When Dom pronounced his full name in that tender and trusting way, Matt's mind went blank and he acted on impulse, joining their lips, without thinking that he probably had morning breath and surely one of the new rules was that they couldn’t repeat any of the acts they had done the last night.
To Matt’s surprise, Dom didn’t pushed him right away, but accepted his kiss enthusiastically and laughed softly when they parted, his cheeks tinged with a slight blush and looking timidly at him, but looking somehow confident.* aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww!!!!! so cute OMB!!!!!!! <333

This was lovely! Please, I need to read the sequel!!! Post it #SOON !!!

Pam <3

Date: 2013-09-21 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much Pam!!! :D Aaww I'm sorry! It's my fault, I didn't tell you about it because I was shy about it x) I only told Lu, Vasu and Annabel, because I think we didn't meet (and by "meet" I mean we don't adress the other one directly) yet.

Well, honestly, it isn't my first Belldom, because my first Belldom was an AU I didn't finish yet (something to do with supermarkets; don't ask xD). But this was the first one I finished and posted.

Uh! So in "Closer" they're going to be drunk, too? I like it! I think that, if they are truly straight (HAHAHAHA) and they have never think "in cold" about what they (obviously *coughs*) feel for each other, the only rational mean to arrive to that point is by alcohol, because they'll lose themselves and let speak what they truly feel <3

Thank you very much again for reading, commenting and your kind words! I'm translating the sequel, I hope to have it for the end of next week or #soon(er)! :P

Date: 2013-09-22 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zetastation.livejournal.com
Oooooh!! There's no need to be shy when the topic is "belldom fanfics"!!! haha oh and I totally understand you xD So let's start to address each other directly now! haha =D

Hmm! Interesting! My first Belldom was a 203 pages long series called "Undisclosed Desires". I haven't finished it yet as well xD In portuguese it has 203 pages but I only translated 3 chapters :S tbh, I even deleted my english entries bc I decided to use the UD ideas on my WIPs or new one-shots :)

Oh yeah! In Closer stuffs will happen and it's alcohol's fault! hehehe and omg! I agree with you when you said " if they are truly straight (HAHAHAHA) and they have never think "in cold" about what they (obviously *coughs*) feel for each other, the only rational mean to arrive to that point is by alcohol, because they'll lose themselves and let speak what they truly feel"!!!!! You read my mind!!!!! ='D

You're welcome hun! Oh plz! let me know when you post the sequel! *---*

Date: 2013-09-22 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
I promise I will ;)

203 pages? Omg, I have never written this much in all my life! But it's fine you're catching ideas from that for new fics :)

Date: 2013-09-27 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
What is this?! What is this brilliance, I am just dying here because I love this so much! You have NOTHING to be nervous about, dear and holy frick, I just want to hug you because this is gorgeous and I DEMAND a sequel asap haha!

Seriously, well done! And thank you for sharing! <3

Date: 2013-09-27 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Aaaawwww you read it!!!!! Thank you very very much, this made my day! :D

I'll have it finished this weekend, but I don't know when I'll have it beta-ed so... no idea when it'll be posted, hopefully next week? *crosses fingers* Anyway, thanks again for reading and I'm glad you liked it, you made me so happy! <3

Date: 2013-10-04 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hesterias.livejournal.com
How beautiful! This story was just lovely and certainly made my night. You are an amazing author! I also read this in Spanish and holy fuck, they're both perfect.

Esto es divino. <3

Date: 2013-10-06 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I'm so glad to hear that it made the night of someone *g* Aaawww thanks, thanks!!!!! I'm so happy you read it on both languages because I changed a little some bits here (for example when Dom is kissing him, I amplied a bit the description).

Gracias <3

Date: 2014-12-06 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamar elmensdorp-lijzenga (from livejournal.com)

I like it :). All the talks Matt thinks he's going to have, when in the end only 3 words were spoken. And who could possibly resist Dom lips :)?

Date: 2014-12-07 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuraicha.livejournal.com
Glad you do! And I'm very happy you noticed that, because it was something I didn't realise until I had finished writing the story and I loved that detail, how much Matt rambled in his head but at the end it was so simple :)

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